Lets make a song or rap

thanks @Dukedog !

Alright, here's my rap (try to insult me on this)
Yeah, I get it, yall so fine
But I got 2 mil in my pocket that says Jail time

*sirens*

Uh, uh, uh yeah, I saw a pretty Lady in a tight Mini skirt,.. I swear it made my eyeballs hurt !. :).

Hey I spent like 20 seconds on this rap here guys, don't just dismiss it as total garbage, I was hoping that Snoop would be interested in this lyrical slaying.
:).

let's see

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@MIHIR_KATTI said in #16:
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how tf is that rap

a track i wrote today

///-Hook (M.A.)
(Malone, Malone)
I'm livin' like Post
Pull up like casper
I be in a ghost

I ain't come to boast
But I got 'em sayin' wow
I'm doin' the most

They givin' me toasts
But I don't need shxt
I fly coast to coast

I'm speakin' the facts
My life is a rap
Now play the verse`

///-Verse 1 (M.A.)
My life changed in the back of a cop car
Stupid xss kid, I turned to a rockstar
Droppin' a album, you know it gon' top charts
Write all my shxt, nah I ain't no pop star

Like last name malone, You know I'm gon' ball hard
No White Iverson, But I still got the braids
Workin' my xss off until 'til I get paid
The ops is a record, they 'bout to get to played

Fxck everyone who say I can't be shxt
Fxck everyone who hate since I a kid
Look ma, see what I did
Look dad, listen to these hits

I can pop off on a remix
I can go off on a freestyle
I can make all the girls go wild
Like Malone with the twelve carat toothache

I finally got my cake
Like its my birthday
Make thursday feel like friday
Pull up at yo' crib and turn that shxt sideways

I ain't ever stop spittin'
Always be rappin'
If I'm not winnin'
I won't be quittin'
Throw touchdown passes
Just like it be Madden

Droppin' singles like extra ones
Spittin' fire like shaq on hot ones
Lately I've been cooped up
Hatin' on me? Don't give two fxcks

Hundred k on youtube
Ain't the goat, but I spit better than you do
Dropin' tracks like U2
RIP to Juice world (yeah yeah)

///-Hook (M.A.)
I'm livin' like Post
Pull up like casper
I be in a ghost

I ain't come to boast
But I got 'em sayin' wow
I'm doin' the most

They givin' me toasts
But I don't need shxt
I fly coast to coast

I'm speakin' the facts
My life is a rap
Yeah, that's a wrap

@Zurel said in #18:
> a track i wrote today
>
> ///-Hook (M.A.)
> (Malone, Malone)
> I'm livin' like Post
> Pull up like casper
> I be in a ghost
>
> I ain't come to boast
> But I got 'em sayin' wow
> I'm doin' the most
>
> They givin' me toasts
> But I don't need shxt
> I fly coast to coast
>
> I'm speakin' the facts
> My life is a rap
> Now play the verse`
>
> ///-Verse 1 (M.A.)
> My life changed in the back of a cop car
> Stupid xss kid, I turned to a rockstar
> Droppin' a album, you know it gon' top charts
> Write all my shxt, nah I ain't no pop star
>
> Like last name malone, You know I'm gon' ball hard
> No White Iverson, But I still got the braids
> Workin' my xss off until 'til I get paid
> The ops is a record, they 'bout to get to played
>
> Fxck everyone who say I can't be shxt
> Fxck everyone who hate since I a kid
> Look ma, see what I did
> Look dad, listen to these hits
>
> I can pop off on a remix
> I can go off on a freestyle
> I can make all the girls go wild
> Like Malone with the twelve carat toothache
>
> I finally got my cake
> Like its my birthday
> Make thursday feel like friday
> Pull up at yo' crib and turn that shxt sideways
>
> I ain't ever stop spittin'
> Always be rappin'
> If I'm not winnin'
> I won't be quittin'
> Throw touchdown passes
> Just like it be Madden
>
> Droppin' singles like extra ones
> Spittin' fire like shaq on hot ones
> Lately I've been cooped up
> Hatin' on me? Don't give two fxcks
>
> Hundred k on youtube
> Ain't the goat, but I spit better than you do
> Dropin' tracks like U2
> RIP to Juice world (yeah yeah)
>
> ///-Hook (M.A.)
> I'm livin' like Post
> Pull up like casper
> I be in a ghost
>
> I ain't come to boast
> But I got 'em sayin' wow
> I'm doin' the most
>
> They givin' me toasts
> But I don't need shxt
> I fly coast to coast
>
> I'm speakin' the facts
> My life is a rap
> Yeah, that's a wrap

OMG. I'm impressed.

Somethin' I wrote some time ago (tell me if you like it it's not great lol)

I didn't want to get up today,
oh,Wanna take some holidays,
yeah, Even if it is monday,
I'd like us to be sunday
Everithing is Grey !

I was tired tomorrow,
getting back to future,
I wanted to be here so,
yo I won't have more culture...
Everything is grey !

I got late before
Being a bad student
Always had bad scores
Wait for me a moment

I really need some help
Just listen to my yelp
I don't know what happens
maybe I'm getting correct?
This isn’t getting well
I think i'll get annoyed
Yeah maybe i'l get tired
Or Oh ! I will get bored
Thats just my first try
I wont give it up
even if I die
I’ll always Hold Up

There must be something that doesn’t goes well
Cause for the moment everything is grey,
There must be something that doesn’t goes well
Attack, bro, before is too late !
You must save the world
everything is getting grey
Yes save the world please
Attack, bro, before is too late !

I’m tired of beeing called
when I am eating, sleeping
or even when I take a bath
Everyone says we need help !

yeah It’s not because
I’m a superhero
That I won’t take a break
You can move the world too

I know everything
about climate change
I know that ice melts
But i’m not a angel

I stopped there and hadn't wrote some after.
XD